T. First time for English Camp

[Katipoth005]

This is the first time in English camp for me. Since I was first year student, I had never gone to any schools for English camp. I went to Nhongsaeng school in Kalasin. When I was in the English camp, I have been a mentor for White team. Most of my duties are talking to the students in the team and helping them to learn in classroom and do activities. Most students in the English camp are quite intelligent. Only the young students, that are garde six, could understand slowly in English. For me, There were some problems but other staffs helped and suggested me a lot. Most of all the camp was very nice.
- Mr.T-

[AdminAdmin]

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